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Aouldrain
Date sent: 2018/09/10 21:30:51
Your in-game name: Hobbleswarth or Hobbs

How old you are: I am 17 almost 18

Your gender: Male

Have you been banned on any other servers? No

Why do you think you should be a moderator? I feel that I have been part of this community for a long time. I have spent a lot of hours on this server, and as a moderator, I could provide a lot of aid. Although this being the case I feel that most of all I am helpful not only to the server but to the people on it. Rather than only taking my job seriously I feel I can provide fun and entertainment within the server while also helping members abide by the rules set. The enjoyment of the members is something I feel I can provide. Now to all the skeptical individuals who think I am unfit, I say that I know in the past I wasn't always the best candidate but I am writing before you a sincere app as I feel I am qualified to help run the server and have reflected on all my actions to become a more refined individual to help this community.

How long can you be active on the server every day? 2-4 hours a day varies with school

What country do you live in? The United States

How long have you been on the server? 4 Years

P.S: I encourage everyone to be as critical as possible as this will serve to also help me change as an individual for the better :)
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Hobbleswarth1
Date sent: 2018/09/10 23:42:46
A SOLID -1 FROM ME

This app is like many other ones I've seen in the past: an app that has literally nothing of context to it.

Let's break it down, shall we?
I feel that I have been part of this community for a long time. I have spent a lot of hours on this server, and as a moderator, I could provide a lot of aid.

You have spent alot of hours on the community. Hm....if spending alot of hours on the server is a defining point to receiving moderator, then I should definitely have a staff position at this point! (I'm #6 for most amount of hours spent on server)

Although this being the case I feel that most of all I am helpful not only to the server but to the people on it.

One of the dumbest sentences I've ever read. If you're helpful to the server, then you're already implying that you're helpful to the players on it. This is one of the most cliche claims I've ever seen on a mod app, being repeated on almost every single one. Do not tell me that you want to help the server, because that's something that we already know. We're not stupid, and you shouldn't be stupid enough to think that we don't know that you want to help the server.

Rather than only taking my job seriously I feel I can provide fun and entertainment within the server while also helping members abide by the rules set.

Your job as a mod is not to provide fun or entertainment. It's to 1) uphold the rules 2) serve as an example for other players to follow and 3) serve as a representative for the community at times when large decision need to be made. This entire sentence is completely pointless.

The enjoyment of the members is something I feel I can provide. Now to all the skeptical individuals who think I am unfit, I say that I know in the past I wasn't always the best candidate but I am writing before you a sincere app as I feel I am qualified to help run the server and have reflected on all my actions to become a more refined individual to help this community.


So you spend your last few sentences pleading to the audience to forgive you for past events? Guess what? We don't care. You saying that you have written a sincere mod app means absolutely nothing. You saying that you've reflected on your actions means nothing.

So, your mod app is structured something like this:

(Says that he will help the players [which is, by the way, completely useless in a mod app]) -> (Says that he is entertaining and fun [which, by the way, is completely useless in a mod app]) -> (Desperately pleading with his peers that he's reflected on himself and has changed [which, by the way, is completely useless in a mod app]).

Okay, so your entire mod app is literally fluff.

Do you want to improve? Okay, I'll give you some things to improve on. First off, put something into your mod app that differentiates you from the person sitting next to you. Why should you get the mod position, and not somebody else? Saying that you'll help the server is nothing new, because it shows me nothing about what you are. Say something unique about yourself that'll make me want to vote for you, because right now, all I see is the usual garbage that clutters most mod apps.

IN ADDITION TO THAT, I have some personal grudges against you.

Two years ago, I remember you from the faction of Proxima. You were applying for mod back then as well. And I have to say, I have never seen a more power hungry or desperate person in my life. You are the literal epitome of power-hungry on this server. You will do anything it takes to scrape a vote, and you will do anything it takes to seize more influence within the server.

Going off from that, when you rejoined in last world, I saw you in the world, and when I refused to join your faction, you said that my faction was "annoying" because it was "too small". You then go on to call me and ben names, until you realized that we weren't responding to you and shut up. You are power-hungry, desperate, and overly ambitious.

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Hobbleswarth1
Date sent: 2018/09/10 23:44:34
also on a separate note was hoping you could take ur post down. But it is up to u
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Aouldrain
Date sent: 2018/09/10 23:50:15
Cant take posts down, noone can
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Presinus
Date sent: 2018/09/11 02:04:16
lmao that confused the fuck outta me at first

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