| Author | Message |
|---|---|
 Pyrrhus |
Date sent: 2017/11/10 17:32:12
ahoy hoy I finally finished building my site. I know there is things I gotta fix (example the thumbnails for projects are not loading on the site)but I wanna hear some opinions on my site so here's a link to it http://cascello.com/ Tell me what you think please |
 Presinus |
Date sent: 2017/11/10 21:32:56
None of the images show up on mobile. <fixed>In click-based adventure game, you write "alot" rather than "a lot" or "allot." In slots, you wrote "atleast" rather than "at least." On monster battles, it says "realy," rather than "really." In learning blender, you called me a silly goose, though I'm obviously a duck. Donations doesn't work, but you know that already. Try adding a background to the site. Overall, it needs a lot of editing, but it's a great start. |
Pyrrhus |
Date sent: 2017/11/10 21:36:01
well shoot the photos the photos load on my mobile (besides the thumbnails I mentioned before [But Im home now so I can try and fix that thumbnail problem])I guess I gotta steal someone elses mobile to test :3 Edit: I fixed the photos not showing up I had the page saying get photo post1Thumbnail.jpg but the photo was called Post1Thumbnail.jpg I don't really know why xammp gave me the same troubles but it didn't but it should be fixed it now bugs me that I didn't name my photos properly because I perfer doing Camel hump notations |
Presinus |
Date sent: 2017/11/10 21:46:28
Hold up, the images finally loaded in. |
Pyrrhus |
Date sent: 2017/11/10 21:49:45
:3 hey you beat me to here but read the edit in second post |
Pyrrhus |
Date sent: 2017/11/15 18:33:02
Just realized you edited a postThanks for going through reading my whole site kinda makes me happy :3 I'll fix the spelling mistakes when I get home form school. I may not make a background to the site cause I kinda like it that way. But Idk if you notice but some of the text don't center properly especially if you view it on mobile I would like to add a donation place. So I'm thinking about using paypal but I don't want to release my real name and based on my understanding it does that |
Presinus |
Date sent: 2017/11/23 03:05:38
Take #2:http://cascello.com/projects.html Scroll down to the description of "The Slots." In the description, it says "html ,css" rather than "HTML, CSS." Notice the comma is moved over and the acronyms are capitalized. http://cascello.com/projectPosts/pPost3ClickBasedAdventureGame.html A spelling error on the 2nd line of paragraph 1: "selceting," rather than "selecting." An inconsistency on the 2nd line of 2nd paragraph "Mr. B-Rocky" is spelled as "Mr. Beroky." On the same line, you misspelled "semester" as "sermester." 3rd line of the 2nd paragraph says "amke" rather than "make." http://cascello.com/projectPosts/pPost2TheSlots.html 2nd paragraph, between the 2nd and 3rd sentence, it says "home.In" without a space after the period. 3rd paragraph, 1st line, it says "black jack" rather than "blackjack." http://cascello.com/projectPosts/pPost1MonsterBattles.html 1st paragraph, last line: you say "cutted" thought the past-tense of cut is cut. 2nd paragraph, 1st line: you spelled "health" as "helf." 2nd paragraph, 4th line: you spelled "usual" as "usal." 2nd paragraph, last line: you spelled "lot" as "ot." Bottom of page, 1 line up: you spell "from" as "form." http://cascello.com/blogPosts/bPost1Blender.html 1st paragraph, 2nd line: the comma between "game" and "cosplay" needs a space. 4th line: the comma between "it" and "and" is pushed over to the wrong side. On the same line, you spelled "reference" as "referance." 5th line: "want" and "then" have 1 space too many between them. I know you wanted opinions, but I'm terrible at picking a side. I'd rather just peer edit your work. |
Pyrrhus |
Date sent: 2017/11/25 14:33:14
thank you it is greatly appreciated. It may not be a opinion but however it is just as or more useful! I'll the mistakes right away! |
 stojan44 |
Date sent: 2017/11/27 18:53:36
Here's a suggestionMake an Idle game. It's easy. and can be fun. as for the site,basic stuff,but alright. |
Pyrrhus |
Date sent: 2017/11/28 04:24:13
OOOOO genius idea. I love it and I'll do it. Thank you for your opinion. I do agree it is very basic but I am very proud of it since it is the first site I've made out of 3 that turned out very nicely (the other two are monsters) I am planning on building a new website hopefully more advanced. |
